tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14646103.post5054194031414160292..comments2024-03-27T05:43:51.239-07:00Comments on The Invisible Ink Blog: Changing the VerbBrian McDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14725832940943503641noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14646103.post-87384132523516466932010-11-06T02:23:08.226-07:002010-11-06T02:23:08.226-07:00I hope this helps point you in a direction you'...I hope this helps point you in a direction you'd rather go with your work.<br /><br />And don't worry everyone makes mistakes on their first script.Brian McDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14725832940943503641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14646103.post-18548800645854273782010-11-05T20:47:33.531-07:002010-11-05T20:47:33.531-07:00I wish my first script, ostensibly the story of a ...I wish my first script, ostensibly the story of a bomber crew in WWII, wasn't so much testament to this very thing. I've known for years that what I have is a well-written chronology of events, not so much a story. It has a hint of a heartbeat in it, but so faint as to be of not much use as a compass. It seems that a question as simple as "What is the *story*?" shouldn't Clinthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16131071036109081147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14646103.post-76475168461406886042010-10-28T02:47:20.066-07:002010-10-28T02:47:20.066-07:00Thanks guys. Glad you get something from the blog...Thanks guys. Glad you get something from the blog.Brian McDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14725832940943503641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14646103.post-36939422833176143712010-10-27T15:53:33.045-07:002010-10-27T15:53:33.045-07:00I find myself nodding at every one of your sentenc...I find myself nodding at every one of your sentences. They all seem so true to me.Quentin Lebeguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09780101710412702578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14646103.post-23604482345934224952010-10-27T09:32:02.651-07:002010-10-27T09:32:02.651-07:00Brian, yes, pretty much the point I wanted to get ...Brian, yes, pretty much the point I wanted to get across. But you do it more gently and reasonably than I, and, truth be told, better.<br /><br />http://www.awritersnotes-billjustbill.blogspot.com/<br /><br />--BillAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com